On that note I was also considering changing the last line of the story to play with the the idea of flipping through vs. taking the time to read by changing it to something like:
"One day as Marty is rushing out of his car to a very important meeting at work,
he sees himself, just a glimpse, in the reflection of the door as it slams shut.
A tired resemblance of his former being. Wrinkles, shadows, the fast life is taking it’s toll.
And he wonders, Will anyone even bother to read this story?"
Because there is a fair amount of text in the book I've included page numbers - they count down instead of up though to tie into the whole theme of the story and the character's impending demise.
Here are some example pages:




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